I don't like the above title, so that will probably change, but overall, I'm 
pretty happy with the way this has turned out.  Since my last post in April 
(I think), I have fixed the chair dimensions (It was too wide), changed the 
style (and completed) the side-table, and made a few other technical 
improvements.

However, I wouldn't mind some advice, especially in certain areas, like 
framing.  I was thinking of making this taller, so that it included more of 
the table and chair legs.  Additionally, I have considered changing the 
camera position, among other things.  Or maybe adjusting the lighting.

Certain parts of the image are "tweaked" and intentional, however.  The 
shadow of the cross falling onto the boxes was very deliberate.  If you 
think you can make out a shadowy figure on the cross shape, you are also 
correct.  I generally don't like pointing out those details, because if 
anyone gets enjoyment from my pictures, it's supposed to be from finding the 
minor details.  I guess that's my approach to Art.  Yes, the cross shadow is 
created by the window mullions (I think that's the right word for the 
divider thingies), so it serves a dual purpose.

Ovearall, this was one image that I definitely tried to keep simple.  KISS 
(keep it simple, stupid) had to be adhered to because, while I doubt the 
Shakers invented the term, it seems to quite readily sum up a large part of 
their belief-system.  So, I believe that I have quite accurately captured 
both the Christianity and the Simplicity evident in their beliefs.  I 
rock!!!  But seriously, that was my intent, and I think I did pretty well, 
hopefully without being too cliched.  But you be the judge of that.

Again, feel free to criticize, offer advice, tell me I'm an idiot, etc. 
Basically, this is one scene on which I would really appreciate feedback, 
positive or negative.  I'm feeling unusually thick-skinned.  ;-)

--
Jeremy M. Praay

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